Draft front page

This is my draft front page and also my plan. This is how I want my front page to look like with similar colours shown on the page. Where the purple boxes are places that is where I want my pictures to go along with small taglines like shown in the draft. From looking at my draft front page I know exactly what to change and how I should make it better, for example the title will have to be changed in many ways such as the colour because its not eye catching as the yellow colour looks faded away and dull, another reason is the name it does not suit the main image as the model is not a girl but a teenager and the last thing with the title is the position. Changing all of these factors will ensure that the colour would be more eye catching and visible and it would fit all the age group appropriately. I am going to change the name of my magazine to `Pop chart' this is because the name has to be suitable for the age group and also the magazine.

From looking at this draft I can tell that the taglines look dull and not exciting at all this is why I will have more exciting stories taglines and also pictures of the hottest new boy bands which from my questioner I found that One Direction is more popular among teenagers.
The colour of the coverlines will also have to change into more exciting bold colours like the colours in my colour palette, this will make it easier for my target audience to  read and understand.